Horror Movie #1

12:50am

DAN – hey i thought of a new plot for a horror movie we should work on

12:51am

PAM – yes…

12:55am

DAN – so its still about a night auditor at a hotel haha

brb guest has a complaint

12:56am

PAM – “Your night auditor is on Facebook too much talkin’ about horror movies!!! But he sure has a sweet ass.”

1:08am

DAN – ok so

im already calling back mandy moore for the lead

1:09am

PAM – I see.

I suppose she works in the hotel as well? Or is she in fact the night auditor

1:10am

DAN –  a new girl at the hotel ….new people usually have to work at least one overnight

1:11am

PAM – Of course…

to get into the swing of things, I’d imagine

1:12am

DAN – and so she’s a lil on edge already a lil un organized but instantly likeable

while shes answering phones or something a man enters the hotel and goes right for the elevator

1:14am

PAM – “Sir, stop! Please!”

1:14am

DAN – shes gettting phone calls coming from different room numbers

1:14am

PAM – What kind of phone calls?

(formulaic even in the description)

1:15am

DAN – havent decided yet…maybe heavy breathing …but later we can hear a murder….the guys get ballsy

1:15am

PAM – “later we can hear a murder, the guys get ballsy”

…just wanna make sure…

1:16am

DAN – i think the guy is just knockin on doors pretending to be a houseman doin repairs…gets into the room and kills the guest

1:16am

PAM – nice.

You’ve got me. I’m hooked.

1:16am

DAN – the girl gets the phone calls….OH! and im thinkin of a way to get the police involved…

1:16am

PAM – does “mandy moore” ever stop him from just walkin’ right in?

1:16am

DAN – nope i was thinkin she doesnt see him….im always afraid of that and i leave the desk often…i think he watches her and waits for her to get a fax or something

1:16am

PAM – okay… that’s WAY more believable

I’m back in…

continue…

DAN – 1:18am

the hotel is accross the police station and i think if i was in the sitch would i call 911 or find a cop outside…

i think i would stay and call maybe

brb gotta fix a tv but i have more!

1:20am

PAM – This is just like in your horror movie. The overnight receptionist goes to fix a tv… all of a sudden, the lights go out… she’s gotta go fix those too and as the problems continue they’re leading her farther and farther towards the basement of the hotel… where he locks her in! Yeah… yeah!

“P2” (part two) the revenge of the security guard’s brother.

1:25am

DAN – lol yeah is how did u know?

1:25am

PAM – shut up

continue

1:25am

DAN – so anyway

the climax is the girl goes up to the room where the last call came from and she heard the murder

or something

1:27am

PAM – or something.

1:27am

DAN – haha

we can justify her going to the room cuz she thinks the guest is sick and needs medical attetion

1:28am

PAM – after hearing something like a murder, I would absolutely lean towards medical attention

1:29am

DAN – anyway we can do all the slow panning of her going down the creepy hallway…goin into the room…checkin it out….finding a body in a bathtub and the killer coming from behind!

this movie is 30 mmins long

1:29am

PAM – all of that twist in 30 minutes

Can it be done?

1:30am

DAN – you know the rest….maybe theres some elevator suspense….i love elevators in horror

will the doors shut SHUT THE DOORS!

1:30am

PAM – elevator suspense is pretty important. That and use of foreshadow.

like she could cut her hand while fixing the tv… and she goes to get a bandaid…

then later… she throws a tv at the murderer and he dies inside of it

so she tosses some bandaids on him and sayd

says : “Back to your regularly scheduled program, ass hole!”

or something like that…

1:32am

DAN – lol

1:41am

DAN – So yeah… i think it’s got potential

 

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